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 # kongruity app
 
-kongruity employs Large Language Model ("LLM") semantic grouping functionality to cluster large volumes of "to dos" or issue tags in development (or other) settings, according to thematic or topical similarity.
+kongruity employs Large Language Model ("LLM") semantic grouping to cluster large volumes of "to dos" or issue tags in development settings, by their thematic or topical similarity.
 
-(To learn more about this topic, see, e.g., [Kozlowski A., Boutyline A., Semantic Structure in Large Language Model Embeddings Aug. 2025, arXiv:2508.10003v1:04 Aug 2025](https://arxiv.org/html/2508.10003v1)).
+(To learn more about semantic grouping, see, e.g., [Kozlowski A., Boutyline A., Semantic Structure in Large Language Model Embeddings Aug. 2025, arXiv:2508.10003v1:04 Aug 2025](https://arxiv.org/html/2508.10003v1)).
 
-In kongruity world, "to dos", action items, agile tickets... the myriad artifacts of the creative/engineering process, are "sticky notes."  
+In kongruity world, "to dos", action items, agile tickets, Jira comment threads (tagged for harvesting) ... the myriad artifacts of the creative-engineering process, are "sticky notes." 
 
-kongruity's React/Vite UI displays a board of seemingly chaotic "sticky notes".  But with one click, they are transformed into manageable, actionable groups, each with a header that explains that group's semantic relation.
+kongruity's React/Vite UI displays a board of your team's seemingly chaotic "sticky notes".  But with one click, they are transformed into manageable, actionable groups, each with a header that explains that group's semantic relation.
 
 The backend is an Express API that serves "sticky note" data and proxies semantic grouping requests to Large Language Models.
 
-Developers may freeely swap in other LLM SDKs and/or APIs... and alter prompt syntax at backend/services/clustering.service.js to compliement their experimentation with any LLM model/platform they prefer.
+Developers may freely swap in other LLM SDKs and/or APIs... and alter prompt syntax at backend/services/clustering.service.js to complement R&D with any LLM model/platform they prefer.
+
 
 ## Prerequisites